”Jag ska redovisa i engelska men behöver hjälp med min text så att det blir korrekt engelska, google translate är ju inget att lita på.
Im going to tell you about a person I admire, my sister. I chosed chose to write about her because she is a very important person for me. She always helps if she can, she’s very degeneres menar du generous? to everybody and a very strong person. She has always been there for me and i know that i can count on her.
She was born in April, 1990 so she is 20 years old today.
When she graduated 9th class grade she went to a boarding school in Finland so that’s why she went in school with the younger students. She went the nursingline in high school and graduated in June 2009.
After highschool, she moved to Norway. She have has been working there for one year at a restaurant in at the airport in Oslo.
When she’s not at her work, she likes to travel, right now she is in Australia with my other sister. She also likes to have fun, party with her friends, shopping and be in the gym.
Everybody thinks that she is a typical girl that don’t want dirt under her nails – they are wrong.
One year ago, she went to the army. She was there a couple of months, and after she been there – the army management wanted her back this year for coaching the other students. She did impress the hold menar du whole? management – when i tell somebody that she was in the army they dont believe me.”
Som vanligt tänker jag inte rätta hela din text för det är ju dina kunskaper du ska få betyg i, inte mina. All din text finns kvar, det jag har lagt till är fetare.
Tänk på att i tredje person singular har verb ett -s i slutet. Exempel, he workS She sayS, it haS. Exempel från din text. ” She always help”, det ska vara She always helps.
Jag heter I, inte i. Stor bokstav. Om du ska redovisa muntligt och inte behöver länmna in ditt arbete kan du såklart strunta i den här punkten.